a baby born of human parents;
a worrisome creature;
a playful beast;
a lover of breasts;
a connoisseur of land.
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3 comments:
::rewrite::
A human;
a baby born of human parents;
a worrisome creature;
a playful beast;
a lover of breasts;
a connoisseur of land.
Simpler. Nice.
I'm putting the concise version up, so for reference, this is the old draft:
A human;
a bipedal primate on the planet Earth;
a baby born of human parents;
clay shaped and reshaped: egg to infant to whirlwind to adult to clay;
a worrisome creature;
a playful beast;
a lover of breasts;
an explorer;
a connoisseur of land;
a Homo sapien;
a charming evader of death.
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